I asked you to write about a fisherman, and you wrote about Gao Qiqiang on the spot?

After all, the theme of the rise of small people is really too much adaptation.

The routine is old, and the audience is tired of watching it.

It's really hard to get people interested.

Unless Lu Chen's next plot is exceptionally well written.

That's another story.

So....

At least for now.

Yan Gelin's development of this plot is lower than he expected....

And at this time....

Liu Heping, who had not spoken much, also spoke.

"The regional background is the soil for the extension of the plot, and the stories produced are different depending on the region.

Just like the high slopes of the loess, it is destined to not appear the unique gentleness and poetry of the Jiangnan water town.

Similarly, in the area where clan culture prevails in Guangdong Province.

Even if you write about the rise of small people and the story that happens, it is definitely different from other places. "

"Yes, Teacher Liu is right!

It depends on whether Lu Chen can organically combine the two concepts of personal rise and clan.

If only to briefly introduce the regional environment.

Introduce the unique cultural environment of Guangdong Province.

And not taking advantage of that

It is still based on personal development, resulting in the background design being blurred.

Then I think the story creation of No. 48 will most likely disappoint. "

Shuping continued to throw out his own opinions.

Yan Gelin and Chen Sicheng nodded one after another.

Even Liu Heping bowed his head slightly, agreeing with Shuping's point of view.

After all, everyone had seen Lu Chen delineating the two keywords of clan culture and ancestral hall culture before.

Feel bright and fresh.

But now that the plot unfolds, it is obvious that Lu Chen has not made good use of these two keywords for the time being....

Of course!

Then again.

Now after all, it is only the beginning, the plot has not fully unfolded, and it is definitely inappropriate to draw conclusions too early....

But the beginning of Lu Chen,

To tell you the truth, it's really too decent!

It's no wonder the judges were a little disappointed....

..................

And at this time....

Chen Sicheng listened happily on the sidelines.

He has long said that No. 48 is of average strength.

Liu He Ping glanced at the other party.

But now it seems.

Lu Chen's performance was obviously going towards his evaluation...

The subject matter, like most of the other contestants, is not new, but old-fashioned.

I want to use this story to advance to the next round.

Let's not talk about fools' dreams.

But the probability of promotion is really not high.

Anyway, what the other three judges think, Chen Sicheng doesn't care.

At least in his case.

This kind of old-fashioned story, at least two points will be deducted when it comes up!

If the plot is no longer brilliant, then it will be more deducted!

Chen Sicheng has always felt that a good story must have absolute commercial value.

Since he became a judge.

Then this kind of old soup and old rice, don't mix it!

It is impossible for him to approve!

Live room.

Listen to the conversations of several judges.

Netizens are also talking about it.

[Yes, the teachers are right, it is a bit pulling to unfold the plot! ] I thought I would write about sect infighting, but that's it? 】

[This story is not a proper web novel idea, the key is the old-fashioned web novel idea from more than ten or twenty years ago. ] It's so outdated! 】

[No. 48 is not as strong as Mr. Liu Heping said. ] 】

[To tell the truth, when I first wrote the words [Clan Ancestral Hall Culture] on the 48th, my eyes really brightened. I didn't expect it to be vulgar immediately! 】

[Look again, I hope that Teacher Liu Heping will not hit himself in the face, in case No. 48 does not advance, it is really embarrassing to open the door to embarrassment! ] 】

[Embarrassed to get home! ] 】

[Look, he's ready to write again!] 】

In the picture....

After pacing back and forth a few times, Lu Chen walked to the whiteboard again!

Picking up the black pen, he wrote:

"Because Lin Yaodong wandered the streets all year round, he saw and listened to all directions, and found that collecting waste was very profitable, much more than he made snacks at a stall, in those days, just in the nineties, coastal trade was developed, and all kinds of foreign gadgets poured into the country, including a lot of foreign garbage and so on.

Higashiyama City! (A virtual city in Guangdong Province.) ）

As a port city, it is the first city in China to contact this batch of outlets.

Lin Yaodong, who learned about the money-making project, immediately decided that he wanted to do a business selling scrap products!

For him, what business makes money! Just do whatever he does!

Because he is poor!

The poor boy's thirst for money is engraved in his bones.

In order to make money, Lin Yaodong thinks he can do anything! "

Write this.

Lu Chen paused again.

But this time, he quickly picked up the pen again and continued to write:

Because Lin Yaodong is smart and will come to things, soon he was quite successful in the waste collection industry, and in the next few years, he also earned his first pot of gold by collecting waste.

At that time, he was just in his early twenties, because he entered society early, he had many contacts, and his momentum was comparable to that of people thirty years younger.

Also because of the money earned.

Lin Yaodong's life has changed dramatically!

First of all, the family conditions are good, they can eat enough and live in a house that does not leak rain.

Secondly, their family's reputation in the village has gradually increased.

The villagers would greet him when they saw him.

This drastic change in the external environment.

Let Lin Yaodong really feel the charm of money!

His thirst for money also grew explosively during this time!

He believes that money can bring him everything!

Therefore!

He desperately wants to make more money!

Change yourself!

Change the family!

Even!

He wants to change the tower!

Change the fate of your own vein! "

............

See the last line!

Shu Ping's eyes widened slightly!

"Sticking to the clan!"

"As expected, it is indeed the number of paths from personal development to leading the development of the village!"

Chen Sicheng pouted.

This plot is not only reasonable, but also expected.

Yan Gelin also pursed his mouth and took a deep breath.

"The character is standing up! But...... Still not enough! "

Yan Gelin commented.

Liu Heping continued to watch quietly, without saying a word.

"Teacher Xiao Sa, I see... If you don't change rooms, you can't always be in room 48. "

Chen Sicheng suggested.

Xiao Sa looked at the time, and indeed, stayed in room 48 for several minutes.

It's a bit long....

"Then let's switch rooms, how many judges and teachers?"

In this regard, the people who describe the equality naturally have no opinion.

As a judge, there are so many contestants, they can't just look at one person!

Not to mention, the story of number 48.

To be fair, it's really not exciting enough....

At least for now.

Forthwith.

Little Sacher went to other live broadcast rooms, and the judges continued to comment on the other contestants.

............

[Alas, this story is not very interesting, I will also go to other rooms to see. ] 】

[I'll go too.] 】

[You can take a look at the No. 4 live broadcast room, it's quite interesting, No. 4 designed a plot similar to a stage play, which is quite fun. ] 】

[Stage play? Country stage play? Wow, kind of interesting, I'll take a look. 】

【I'll go too! 】 】

The people in the live broadcast room, like the water of the rising tide, come and go quickly.

In the blink of an eye, the number of 300,000 people fell by more than half.

Even the number of people is decreasing dramatically.

It almost fell below 100,000.

............

And at this time.

Inside the room.

Lu Chen, who knew nothing about the outside world, continued his own deduction.

Write to this step.

Lin Yaodong's mental construction has basically taken shape.

Values!

Money view!

Worldview!

All have been initially established!

People are only fascinated by something, longing!

will breed greed!

Breeds ambition!

With greed and ambition, talent will desperately want more!

It was precisely this mentality and motivation that eventually led Lin Yaodong to become a big drug lord!

And the next plot is very critical!

It was precisely because of this incident that Lin Yaodong embarked on the road of crime for the first time!

And use this as a turning point and opportunity.

It has a profound impact on it!

From the inside out, usher in the first transformation of your life!

It really laid a solid foundation for becoming a big drug lord later!

This opportunity and turning point is to smuggle cars!

Although it is not explicitly stated in the original play.

But it's not hard to speculate.

As Lin Yaodong grew in experience, he was gradually not satisfied with the "small profit" of collecting waste products!

Finally found smuggling, very profitable!

So he took a desperate step and started a smuggling business.

It also laid an important foreshadowing for his escape to Xiangjiang and contact with drugs!

So....

The next plot is the beginning of the real climax of this story!

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