I asked you to write about a fisherman, and you wrote about Gao Qiqiang on the spot?

Lu Chen: "What happened in the middle?"

Can you, Tang Xiaolong, Tang Xiaohu, plus a policeman Anxin,

Connecting the four of you...

If I'm not mistaken, you should have fought with the Tang brothers, right? "

Gao Qiqiang: "Yes, I fought it, but I still hit it in Chinese New Year's Eve." "

"What's the situation?"

Lu Chen smoothly pulled out a huazi from the coffee table: "Do you want it?" "

Gao Qiqiang: "I don't smoke, you smoke less, young, what do you smoke?" "

"Okay, then don't smoke."

Lu Chen put the cigarette back again.

............

Off-screen.

Netizen: "..."

[If I hadn't seen it with my own eyes, I really couldn't believe it!] 】

[There won't really be someone in front of Lu Chenju, right?! ] My Nima cold hair is standing up! 】

[Write like a god!] I finally understood the meaning of the name of this competition! What a god! 】

[The screenwriter is so cool! ] I never thought screenwriters were like this! It's so hot! 】

【Unprecedented feeling, indescribable! 】

[I have seen the next four sessions, even if it is the first session of Fengsheng, I have not seen any contestants, there is this creative state! ] It's really scary! This young man is really amazing! If it doesn't sound, it's already a blockbuster! 】

[Become a king, Lu Chenju, borrow this work, become a king!!! 】

[Paralyzed into you, a bunch of SB! ] 】

[Vomiting, a bunch of middle and second diseases, brain bubbles, still become a king, One Piece or brain dead king? ] 】

[This bird feather is a neuropathy, especially Laozi embarrassing cancer is going to commit! ] 】

............

Program group backstage.

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Hongtao's brows furrowed.

"What's the situation, why are there so many trolls all of a sudden?"

"Director, this gang is a water army, many of them are an IP! Could it be that someone deliberately wants to make the whole morning?! "

The program group administrator looked at the background and found the clue.

"Forbidden, all scolding is banned!"

"Good!"

"What about the same IP?"

"Just keep one!"

"Understood!"

............

Water army companies.

Inside the walkie-talkie, an eager voice suddenly came: "Brother Hu, our accounts have been blocked in batches!" "

Brother Hu continued to Erlang's legs, chewing betel nut, and didn't take it seriously at all: "What are you afraid of, panicked, isn't it all expected, start Plan 2." "

"Understood!"

Brother Hu threw down the walkie-talkie with a disdainful expression: "Play ban? What a joke, we are professional! Do you know professionally! "

While playing King, he glanced at Lu Chen's live broadcast room from time to time.

Neuropathy!

This guy is a neurotic!

God nagging!

Hold this jumping god?!

............

And with Hongtao's order, the account was blocked.

The number of people in the live broadcast room suddenly dropped by as much as 200,113!

Many netizens were dumbfounded.

What the heck?

Could it be that all the people just now were water troops?!

............

And now.

Inside the room.

Lu Chen and Gao Qiqiang's dialogue continued.

Gao Qiqiang: "Because of the stall, I begged the Gao brothers three or four times to let me go."

I know they don't have to line up the stalls.

It's nothing more than wanting to squeeze some more benefits.

I know!

I, a person who buys and sells with people every day, can I still not understand?

Sure enough.

Tang Xiaolong relaxed.

He told me that there were bad things in his home. "

Lu Chen: "What?" "

Gao Qiqiang: "A TV set, to be precise, is a plasma TV set. I guess you should never have heard of this kind of thing at your age.

In 2,000 years, this television was a treasure. Do you know how much one costs? "

Lu Chen shook his head.

Gao Qiqiang: "More than 20,000!" "

Lu Chen: "It's excessive, in those days it was more than 20,000, what kind of concept did that have, selling a fish only costs a few dollars." "

Gao Qiqiang: "Who said it wasn't, I calculated that I had to sell at least 6,000 fish to make up this hole, according to my 200 fish a day at that time." I've got to work for a month! "

Lu Chen: "You didn't send it?" "

Gao Qiqiang: "Send ah, can you not send it, how can I keep this booth if you don't send me." But I really couldn't afford to send a plasma TV, so I bought an ordinary one, which also cost several thousand. "

Lu Chen: "The Gao brothers are definitely not satisfied!" "

Gao Qiqiang nodded: "Of course!" You think they really want plasma TVs?

They want their hearts!

That would, plasma TV is something that only rich people can afford, and ordinary people who can afford to watch it.

But people, the poorer they are, the more they want to prove themselves, the less they don't, the more they want to have, it's all human nature. "

Lu Chen: "Listening to the tone of your speech, I always feel that you don't look like a junior high school graduate." "

Gao Qiqiang: "Don't look at my low culture, in fact, I am very studious." Because I know that people can't do without knowledge, without knowledge you can't do business, at least not big business. "

Lu Chen: "I agree!" And later? "

Gao Qiqiang: "Later, I sent the TV to their house, and when Gao Xiaolong saw it, he was not happy at that time and wanted to kick me out of the house." The implication is that the position of this fish stall will not be given to me.

I'll just say nice things.

He doesn't listen.

I thought to myself, since this is already the case.

Then leave it to fate.

So I carried the TV and planned to go home.

If the gift failed, the TV was left to my younger siblings.

They haven't seen such a good TV.

New Year's and New Year's Day, I added a big item to my home, just to make them both happy. "

Lu Chen: "Your brother is really good." "

Gao Qiqiang: "I have two relatives of my younger brothers and sisters, I am not good to them, who is good to them." "

Lu Chen: "Then how do they treat you?" "

Gao Qiqiang: "Very good, obedient and sensible, excellent academic performance, never need me to worry." This is also the biggest reason why I am willing to sell fish, there is hope! Thinking that my younger brothers and sisters in the future will have a chance, I, the brother, can also get some light and enjoy some blessings. "

Lu Chen: "It's good, I envy you have such good younger siblings." And then, how did it start? "

Gao Qiqiang: "As a result, I just planned to go downstairs. Tang Xiaohu's kid, who sneaked up on his back, pushed my new TV downstairs and smashed it on the spot.

I was furious.

The new TV, without opening it, smashed it for me!

What about a few thousand pieces, can I not be fired?

So without saying a word, I started working with Tang Xiaohu!

Of course, there were many of them, and I was beaten by them so that my nose was blue and swollen, my face was broken, and my nose was bleeding. "

Lu Chen: "So, An Xin is here?" "

Gao Qiqiang: "No, our group was taken to the police station. I was in the police station that Chinese New Year's Eve. "

Lu Chen: "Didn't anything happen in the middle?" Did An Xin judge you? "

Gao Qiqiang: "Yes. "

Lu Chen: "Tell me about your first impression of An Xin?" "

Gao Qiqiang smacked his lips: "The first impression is nothing, just ordinary police." However, the young man is very spiritual, kind-hearted, and has a sense of intimacy. Not like later, like an old man. "

Lu Chen: "But as far as I know, the first time you and An Xin met, it seems that there are still stories, it is not so simple." "

Gao Qiqiang said with a smile: "You all know, why are you still asking me?" "

Lu Chen: "I just know an approximate idea, and others don't know." "

Gao Qiqiang shook his head and smiled, and his finger nodded at me: "You, you have to dig into the bottom of it, right?" "

Lu Chen: "Small talk, besides, I also want to know the specific situation in the middle." "

Gao Qiqiang was silent for a while, and then spoke again:

"That evening, after the interrogation, I was locked up in the interrogation room, and I told An Xin if you could let me go back early, my younger brothers and sisters were still waiting for me to cook.

The policeman next to me scolded me and said, what am I thinking, I am fighting, and I will definitely not go back tonight.

I was anxious because my younger siblings didn't know I had been taken to the police station.

Unexpectedly, my brother and sister actually found the police station.

Also brought me dumplings.

Just met An Xin at the door.

An Xin brought them in.

Later, my sister told me that the dumplings she made for me were not good, and the paper was either broken or broken.

I want to think about it too.

How can the two siblings cook?

I never let them do it. "

Gao Qiqiang couldn't laugh or cry.

After that, An Xin gave me her own dumplings and a box for my younger siblings. (Read violent novels, just go to Feilu Fiction Network!) ）

To be honest, I'm grateful to him.

That Spring Festival, although I spent it at the police station.

But I was extra down-to-earth and comfortable.

And then I thought, why do you feel that way?

Got it, human touch!

From childhood to adulthood, we brothers and sisters have been bullied.

Therefore, it makes me easy to beware of the character of outsiders.

But An Xin, with that dumpling, left a very deep impression in my heart.

I just realized that there are people who can be so kind and helpful.

I'm grateful to him.

Until now, I am grateful to him.

By the way, that's on the night...

Me and him, just like I am now with you, face to face.

He sat at the interrogation table and I sat in the interrogation chair.

Eat dumplings together.

Outside, there is a lively sound of fireworks.

(BCBH) Next door you can still vaguely hear the spring evening program. "

Lu Chen: "It seems that you do remember it very well. "

Gao Qiqiang: "Of course, that dumpling, including that Spring Festival, means a lot to me and An Xin."

I also didn't expect that my relationship with him would be tied for decades because of this dumpling.

He didn't expect it even more! "

Gao Qiqiang was a little gloating, but in his eyes, there was a look of reminiscence...

............

And at this time.

Inside the live broadcast room.

Shu Ping took a deep breath and sighed sincerely: "Lu Chen, this kid, has already entered, completely entered!" "

Yan Gelin laughed and said, "I just said that this kid retained his strength in the last round, sure enough!" I envy his state. When I wrote Thirteen, I didn't go so deep! "

Chen Sicheng on the side, his pupils quake, couldn't believe it.

I wipe ~

Can the script still be written like this?

How did I not know?!

As a layman, Xiao Sa looked more and more strange, and he stammered: "Teacher Shuping, Teacher Yan, this... This state of creation is too shocking!

Can you really let a virtual character talk to yourself? How do I feel with..."

"Like schizophrenia, huh?"

Shuping smiled: "The screenwriter is like this, not crazy, not alive." "

"Well, it's really a long time to see today." Little Sa sighed again and again.

"Teacher Shuping, what do you think of this Gao Qiqiang character?" Yan Gelin suddenly asked.

"At the moment, it's almost certain. Gao Qiqiang's design ideas should be the same as Lin Yaodong, the villain of this story. "

Yan Gelin nodded.

"But it's different from the last round.

In the last round, Lu Chen used the method of subjective deduction to deduce Lin Yaodong.

But this round, Lu Chen used dialogue to help us better understand the role of Gao Qiqiang, and the character image was fuller.

It depends on whether Lu Chen can stand firm in the core conflict and key characters.

If you can do both, at the same time!

Then the character is really alive!

So I personally feel that the charm of Gao Qiqiang's character may not be much worse than Lin Yaodong.

But for now, Gao Qiqiang's character tension is still much weaker than Lin Yaodong. "

"Yes!" Yan Gelin deeply agreed: "Lin Yaodong has the addition of the theme and intention of clan culture.

Gao Qiqiang did not!

As a result, the innate is not as eye-catching as Lin Yaodong.

Although we already know that Gao Qiqiang will eventually become a big figure in the local area.

But as an audience, we already have character expectations.

In addition, with Lin Yaodong Zhuyu in front, Lu Chen wants to create the same type of villain again...

The difficulty will naturally increase!

I think this is also the after-effect of his last round of too amazing performance.

In short, let's watch the next plot.

See how Lu Chen plans to write?

How to write the story of the middle part fascinating!

Stand up the character!

That's the key!

See if there is a chance to overtake in corners! "

Shuping nodded.

Xiao Sa on the side, listening to the two judges, spoke at length.

In order to facilitate the audience's understanding, he summarized it and asked:

"Two teachers, can I understand that...

In terms of creative techniques, Lu Chen's contestants have a very amazing performance.

But at present, Gao Qiqiang, a key figure, is not as good as the two teachers expected?

Because before, Lu Chen had already written a similar theme of "Icebreaking Action"?

created such a classic villain as Lin Yaodong!

Compared with Lin Yaodong, this Gao Qiqiang is relatively mediocre?

Is that what you mean, two teachers? "

"Almost."

The two bowed.

"Is it fair to say that this story is inherently not as wonderful as the previous round?"

"Can't say that, Teacher Xiaosa!" Shuping shook his head: "The above comparison, we are only for the protagonists, that is, Gao Qiqiang and Lin Yaodong.

But don't forget that Lu Chen's current creative state is generally used for group portrait story creation!

In other words, not only Gao Qiqiang has bright spots.

In this story, other characters should also have highlights.

If you can really do that.

That story is less exciting than "Icebreaker", I dare not assert.

But its upper limit must be higher than "Icebreaker"!

There is no doubt about that."

"Why!"

"Because of Icebreaker, it's not a group story!

It's a drama story!

Its upper limit, relatively limited!

As I said before, without the role of Lin Yaodong, would "Breaking the Ice" really be so wonderful?

Not necessarily!

That's the charm of the characters!

A good character can raise the height of the entire work!

We pick out a random piece and you can always remember the key characters inside!

For example, Yumo and the doctor in "Thirteen".

Another example is Hai Rui of "Daming Dynasty", guests, Yan Song, etc.

This is the blessing of a character to a work! "

Yan Gelin said with a smile: "There is also Zhang Mazi in "Let the Bullets Fly", Shiye, Huang Shilang, and Lao Liu, who is willing to cut his abdomen for a bowl of noodles. "

Shuping also smiled.

Chen Sicheng on the side, black lines on his forehead.

Dare to love you to set up a platform, it is really addictive...

"So, you can imagine how high the ceiling is when a work has multiple impressive characters?

Almost infinitely high!

Therefore, Lu Chen's round of propositional stories, we must pay attention to his design on the characters!

Especially in the design of group portraits!

For me.

Since he has adopted this creative approach.

Then this round, I will not judge it according to the standard of a [plot story].

I must judge it by the standards of [group portrait stories].

If the group portrait design is successful! Lu Chen succeeded!

Failed! He failed!

There is no third way! "

With Shu Ping throwing out this loud heavy comment!

In the judges' room, the atmosphere was suddenly detonated!

Xiao Sa took the lead in applauding.

Yan Gelin on the side, Liu Heping also applauded.

Indicate consent.

As for Chen Sicheng in the corner, although he was also applauding.

But one head and two big.

A little broken in the heart!

Damn, I'm a judge, why can't I understand the more I listen?!

Please, I'm a judge!.