I asked you to write about a fisherman, and you wrote about Gao Qiqiang on the spot?

"Teacher Chen, you said that the first reason you scored six is that the integrity of the story is not high!

So I ask you, what exactly does it take to be considered a high integrity?!

Come on, the director team, first tune out the picture of Lu Chen's live broadcast room for me and project it on the screen! "

Yan Gelin's domineering side leak!

Soon, the picture of Lu Chen's live broadcast room was put on the big screen.

The first thing that catches the eyes of the contestants is the three whiteboards, dense text!

"I go, wrote so much!"

"I just wrote a whiteboard."

The contestants were stunned!

Yan Gelin pointed to the picture on the screen and said, "Teacher Chen, see for yourself, where is this story not complete!"

The villain Lin Yaodong, the three rooms of the tower village below, as well as Haoyu Group, and the dark line umbrella design.

Zhengfang Li Weimin, Li Fei, Zhao Jialiang.

The three people led out two lines and sniped Lin Yaodong together!

You look at the plot of these fifteen episodes again, the logic is clear, the main line is clear, and the characters are staggered!

It can be said that this story must have characters and plots!

Be intentional! Be connotative!

As a result, you tell such a story, it is not very complete ?! "

"Teacher Yan, I..."

"You listen to me first!"

Yan Gelin interrupted Chen Sicheng again.

"Then let's talk about the second reason!

You say this drama is off topic?

I seem to remember that you said at the beginning of the show that if you write instead, you might write about the theme of the rural resistance.

Think about it yourself, you have fused the two elements of the countryside and the war of resistance, why is it a digression for Lu Chen to write a rural drug sweep?

Besides, the story is designed so clearly!

It is to destroy the poisonous village of Tazhai!

Isn't a poison village a village?

Why is it off topic?

Speaking of which.

I have to say, [homogenization is serious] this thing.

We have been repeating this issue in the game.

At the end of this round, we found that too many contestants chose the same theme.

Leads to similar plots, similar designs, and similar central ideas?

Do you think this is a good thing?

Also, you always talk about the rules of the show, I'll ask you!

What is the ultimate purpose of this competition?

Is it for writing the eight-strand text?!

Or to cultivate formulaic writing!?

Isn't our real purpose to dig up good stories!

In order to allow more excellent screenwriters to enter the public eye?!

I believe that this is the real original intention of this show!

Instead of a rule on the left and a rule on the right in your mouth!! "

Yan Gelin's sound boom hall!

The bruises on the face are obviously bulging!

Can't help but be moved, side-eyed!

This point of view can also answer your last point - program creation!

What is it called to create a minefield, attracting people's attention?

You've said this more than once before during your live broadcast.

I refuted you before, and I will refute you now!

I admit that at the beginning, Lu Chen's story did have an element of attracting attention!

That's because we don't know his story!

Because I didn't understand, there was a misunderstanding!

But!

That's the creative process!

You look at these whiteboard letters.

The core of his story, how to deduce it!

I, I, Teacher Shuping, Teacher Liu Heping!

Including the majority of netizens, they have seen it with their own eyes!

Don't you, as a judge, even understand the creative means of deducing stories?!

It's always a bite of one rule, one bite of one rule!

What so many rules, so many rules!

I'm leaving it out today!

I'm here to be a judge!

I want to see a good story!

See great screenwriting talent!

As long as in the end, the creation of this story is reasonable and legal!

Meet the requirements!

Then everything that happens in the middle, I think, is secondary!

As for what commercial value you are talking about!

I do not express an opinion on this.

After all, I'm just a screenwriter, unlike you, a director of tens of billions of dollars!

But you said the first three points, I personally don't recognize one!

Even I think that these three of you are completely nonsense! "

"Well said!"

Behind him....

When Yan Gelin said this!

Shuping applauded warmly on the spot!

Even Liu Heping applauded slightly, expressing his attitude!

I saw both great mentors applaud.

After the players were stunned.

Also start clapping threes and threes!

It finally turned into a raging applause!

Live room.

Countless netizens are crazy at this moment, tears!

[Teacher Yan's wave is too fan-absorbing! ] 】

[Look crying! ] Teacher Yan is too rigid, Thai pants are spicy! 】

[It's so cool, in front of Chen Sicheng, slap his face! ] Love Teacher Yan! 】

[Call for Teacher Yan!!] 】

[Thank you Teacher Yan for speaking up and justifying Lu Chenju's name! ] 】

............

On stage.

The little Sataren is equally stupid!

I never expected that the two mentors would openly "fight" on stage for Lu Chen!

This....

Little Sa's heart mountain road eighteen bends!

Of course, Chen Sicheng's comment was unexpected.

But Yan Gelin's domineering tearing is even more unexpected!

Look at this posture!

If nothing else.

Today's hot searches on major social media such as funny yin and bib neck are likely to be dominated by "Next Pen"!

............

At this time, the most ugly face is undoubtedly Chen Sicheng!

He never expected that Yan Gelin would openly contradict him in his comment link!

The key is still so "arrogant"!

Moment.

Chen Sicheng, who felt that he was seriously offended, turned gloomy.

"Teacher Yan, have you said enough, can you let me say two words?"

Yan Gelin did not speak, indicating acquiescence.

Chen Sicheng snorted coldly: "You can disagree with my opinion, but I think you don't have the right to interfere with my rating!" "

"Wrong, Teacher Chen, I didn't interfere with your grading, and I didn't want to interfere.

You give six points, five points, even if you give zero points today, I will never interfere with you.

But I want to remind you!

Although you have the power to score!

But as judges, we have the power to supervise each other.

If, you are right today!

I will never stand up and refute a word from you!

But your comments are so outrageous!

I think I am obligated to make some comments on your statement! "

"Giving six points is my evaluation!"

"Okay, then you continue to maintain your opinion, I didn't want you to change the score.

But you can't take away my right to say what you say either! "

"You!"

Chen Sicheng's chest rose and fell violently!

"Okay! I don't refute you! But don't worry, I won't be affected by you! My evaluation of Lu Chen's players is all my sincere evaluation! If he wants to listen, he will listen, he will not listen, and I will not force it! "

"Come on, your opinion, I think it's better not to listen to it!"

Yan Gelin is too sassy!

Say what you think!

She turned her words and suddenly looked at Lu Chen under the stage.

"Lu Chen!"

"Yes, Teacher Yan!"

"Don't let some people's evaluations affect your own confidence and judgment!

At least I, Teacher Shuping, Teacher Liu Heping, all recognize your creative style!

In the next round of 16, I hope you will give your all!

Write better stories!

You know, a screenwriter's best weapon is his story!

Use your story to gag those who question you!

Did you hear that?! "

"I heard that, Teacher Yan!"

Offstage, Lu Chen nodded heavily and bent down to thank him!

In the face of Yan Gelin's practice of speaking for himself regardless of face and image!

Lu Chen was naturally very grateful in his heart!

In the next round of promotion, he is ready to give his all, and he must take the first place in the next round!

Otherwise, I'm sorry Yan Gelin, Shu Ping, Teacher Liu Heping......

Open support for yourself today!

"Okay, come on! I'm bullish on you! "

After speaking, Yan Gelin did not take Chen Sicheng again, stuffed the microphone into Xiao Sa's arms, and returned to the team.

Chen Sicheng's face was as heavy as water, almost to the edge of losing control!

But for the sake of the whole network live broadcast.

He still suppressed the anger back, and without saying a word, returned to the team.

Looking at this embarrassing scene atmosphere, Xiao Sa was under great pressure!

Helpless, I can only use my full strength to mediate!

Smiling, "Everyone! Although the discussion between the two judges teachers was very intense!

But I believe that they are all taking responsibility for the players and the competition, and expressing their personal opinions.

As a player, I think everyone should rejoice!

Thankfully, the judges can be so responsible!

In this....

Please let us give the two teachers a round of applause! "

Xiao Sa took the lead and applauded!

In the audience, applause was everywhere!

Seeing that the atmosphere is finally better.

Xiao Sa did not dare to delay and went straight to the topic:

"Then next, I will officially announce the final score of the Lu Chen player, this round.

Network rating 8.4.

Judging panel score, 9 points, 9 points, 10 points, 6 points, overall score: 8.5 points.

Therefore, the final rating of Luchen contestants is: 8.45 points! "

Another round of applause....

"So far, the top 32 in this round have all been born!

Next, look at the big screen! "

screen.

Ranked by grades, top 32, officially arranged!

Unexpectedly, Lu Chen actually ranked fourth!

[I really laughed angrily, this round of popularity is the most explosive, setting a number of records, actually only ranked fourth! ] Who believes this, family! 】

[It's really a big score, and I didn't even enter the top three! ] 】

[Scumbag Chen destroyed an originally perfect result with his own hands!!] 】

[Don't worry, under the hot search tonight, there must be a large number of scolding Chen Sicheng! ] 】

[It's useless to scold, people's judges!] 】

[The network will put pressure on him! ] 】

[Lao Tzu really wants to to force Wang Chen! ] He is just jealous of Lu Chen, jealous!! 】

[Jealous? It won't be so narcissistic, people are tens of billions of directors! What is there in your family? 】

[Hehe, don't be weird about yin and yang! ] It's only the round of 32 now, and there's still a long game ahead! 】

[Don't pretend, it's really so awesome, you have the ability to write a Tang Tan? ] Or Northern Ireland. 】

[Don't worry, "Icebreaker" is definitely stronger than your scumbag Chen's "Northern Love"! ] I'll leave it at that! 】

[Hehe, die laughing! ] Pretend to be better than who won't ah~].

[That is, if the top sixteen promotion match is brushed off, then it will really die of laughter! ] 】

Live room.

Lu Chen's fans, and Chen Sicheng's fans, accidentally pinched the fight!

The two sides fought each other!

But in the end, it is based on Lu Chen's huge number of fans!

Beat Chen Sicheng to defeat.

............

And with the top 32 list, fully announced!

This round of competition is also officially coming to an end!

Xiao Sa stood in the middle of the stage!

Holding the microphone, he said loudly: "Dear audience, this round of competition is over here!"

Ten days later, we will start the second round, the round of 16 qualifiers!

You can take the time to pay attention to the "Under the Pen Like God Conference" funny and neck account!

Stay up to date with the show!

Finally, thank you all for your close five-hour companionship!

Audience, let's meet again in ten days! "

With Xiao Sa previewing the time of the next round of matches!

The contest is officially over!

The contestants and judges left the hall one after another.

The live broadcast also stops~

............

Ten minutes later!

Office of the General Director.

"Knock knock!"

"Come in!"

"Director, are you looking for me?"

Lu Chen pushed the door and entered, looking confused.

After the competition, Lu Chen, like the other players, was ready to pack up and go home.

Unexpectedly, the staff told him.

Chief director Hongtao wanted to see him.

So, Lu Chen came.

"Come on, come on, sit down."

Hongtao pointed to the stool in front of him.

Lu Chen sat down.

Hongtao was crying and laughing, and came up with bitter water: "Lu Chen, let you write about the countryside, what the hell are you in this tower?" "

Lu Chen: "..."

"Director, rural drug sweeping is also a village, you just say I don't button the topic, right?!"

"Okay, okay, I'll just complain."

Hongtao smiled and waved his hand: "Actually, I came to you to discuss with you about the collective bidding meeting at two o'clock tomorrow afternoon." "

"Collective bidding? Tomorrow afternoon? "

"How, are you in trouble?" Hongtao asked.

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