After all, a player who relies on writing illegal plots and attracts people's attention!
How can you appreciate it yourself!?
Chen Sicheng coughed his throat and felt that he needed to say two words!
"Teacher Shuping, I think Lu Chen's description of clan culture is too superficial!
Clan culture is such a thing with a long history, depth, content, and a sense of heaviness!
But you found no.
From beginning to end, Lu Chen only emphasized the concept of clan culture, and always emphasized how deeply the clan culture influenced Lin Yaodong.
But he never mentioned the background of the Lin clan, as well as some family disciplines and so on.
Don't you think, this is too shallow? "
Chen Sicheng's words came out.
All three judges cast their eyes.
The eyes looked at him slightly strangely.
"Teacher Chen, it's good to be demanding, but isn't it unreasonable to be too demanding, just three hours of creative time, if you want to do everything, this is not reasonable in itself, right?
Moreover, Lu Chen only needed to draw the concept of clan out now.
There is time to add content to it later, it is completely timely. "
Shuping retorted.
It's only three hours of creative time, and it's very cramped to create a story.
What else do you expect to be invulnerable?
Shuping just can't tell it in person, give you three hours, what story can you create?
Maybe there may not be Lu Chen's current story, so intimate.
When Chen Sicheng heard this, he was first stunned, then paused, and said with a smile: "It's the same, after all, time is limited, just put forward the concept." "
Seeing that Chen Sicheng did not have hard steel, his attitude was quite good.
Shuping also gave him a step.
"But Mr. Chen, you also have a point. Regarding the clan culture, if there is a chance to write a script in the future, Lu Chen really needs to think about it, add some content to it, and make it as full as possible. "
Chen Sicheng nodded.
When Liu Heping and Yan Gelin heard this, they also bowed their heads slightly, which was regarded as a response to this "argument" between the two.
The gaze is once again on the big screen....
Inside the room.
When Lu Chen wrote this, he stopped writing again.
Standing in front of the whiteboard, I thought quietly for a while.
This plot of the ancestral hall.
Lu Chen felt that it was necessary to focus on it.
After all, Lin Yaodong's ultimate goal is not only to lead the tower.
In the paragraph of dialogue with Zhao Jialiang Tiantai.
Lin Yaodong clearly pointed out that his personal highest ideal is to repair one of the most luxurious, largest and most gorgeous Lin ancestral halls.
It can be said that for this goal, Lin Yaodong has been preparing for at least ten years!
Just on the eve of the implementation of the plan!
Tazhai Poison Village has collapsed!
Presumably, this has also become Lin Yaodong's lifelong regret.
In the TV series, the Lin ancestral hall is not only an important filming location.
In the episode, it also appears many times, and Lin Yaodong quietly looks up at the ancestral hall...
So....
Lu Chen felt that it was necessary for him to focus on this section of the ancestral hall.
Explain this section of the ancestral hall clearly and render it fully.
For the audience, it is also beneficial to understand the Lin clan.
It just so happens that in the original play, there is a very detailed description of the Lin ancestral hall...
Think of this.
Lu Chen secretly took a breath and continued to write
"If you say that leading the rise of Tazhai is Lin Yaodong's spiritual goal!
Then, building the small shrine of the main house and repairing the Lin family ancestral hall is Lin Yaodong's material goal.
Building the small shrine of the main house is not difficult for Lin Yaodong.
As a person in this room, as long as you have money, you can repair it whenever you want!
But repairing the Lin Clan Ancestral Hall is not so easy!
It must be a person of high moral character and a well-to-do family to do it.
These two points, with Lin Yaodong's strength at that time, did not possess.
Therefore, repairing the Great Ancestral Hall has become a lofty goal buried in Lin Yaodong's heart after he gradually developed!
(Here, I feel that I need to arrange a background history for the ancestors of the Lin family to highlight the heritage of the Lin family and the historical and cultural background of Tazhai Village.) ）"
Lu Chen deliberately marked it with parentheses.
First, it is to show the mental journey of your own creation, and the direction of thinking!
Guaranteed more "authenticity" for on-site creations!
Second, Lu Chen also had to lay a reasonable foundation for the background that led to the Lin family tree next.
Lu Chen took a pen and paced back and forth in the room.
Judges' room.
Saw Lu Chen write this paragraph.
Yan Gelin laughed on the spot: "It's really said that Cao Cao arrived, we just discussed that the concept of clan is not clear. Lu Chen planned to add the content to the Lin family. "
Shu Ping also immediately turned his head to look at Chen Sicheng and said with a smile: "Teacher Chen, it seems that you asked a question one step earlier." The problem you thought of was obviously already considered by Lu Chen. "
Chen Sicheng's smile was a little stiff, and he said that it was not, and it was not to say it.
I could only barely laugh twice and prevaricate.
I thought: What a hell, I just asked a question, Lu Chen thought about it?
............
Lu Chen was in the room, pacing back and forth for more than a dozen times.
Sudden stop.
Between the eyebrows, a sudden look was revealed.
Then, he hurried to the whiteboard and wrote down a paragraph.
Have an answer so soon?
The judges and netizens all fixed their eyes and wondered what Lu Chen would write.
I saw a line of text as follows:
"The ancestral genealogy records that in the fourth year of the Southern Song Dynasty, Shi Yinggong moved here from Fujian Anxi, purchased acres of land, built grass houses, and settled here.
Later, when his children developed, they changed the original grass shed into an ancestral hall, which was the first time in history that the Lin ancestral hall was built.
Later, during the Qianlong Jiaqing period, thanks to the development of the sugar industry and the prosperity of Jiazigang, the Lin clan repaired the Lin ancestral hall for the second time.
Then during the Republic of China, the army was in chaos, the soldiers were popular, and the clan forces that ensured local peace were able to grow! The strength of the Lin family once reached its peak. The renovated Lin ancestral hall is also magnificent and magnificent. "
?Wow!
See this description.
Liu Heping, Shuping people, all gurgled in his heart!
Rao is a historical drama giant like Liu Heping!
When I saw this description, I didn't feel that my eyes lit up, and my eyes showed a trace of essence!
Shuping, Yan Gelin couldn't help nodding and praised.
"This description is strong and profound! Pretty well written! "
"Across three periods of history, the tone is fresh and condensed, I didn't expect Lu Chen to have the potential to write historical dramas, Mr. Liu, what do you think?"
Yan Gelin looked at Liu Heping.
The latter smiled slightly and nodded: "This background is good, echoing the two themes of clan culture and ancestral hall culture, there is depth, history, and breadth, and it is worth affirming to have such a performance!" "
See that all three judges gave high praise.
Chen Sicheng's face on the side turned even redder.
But there is only one word in my heart: lean!
I didn't expect that on the 48th, there were really two sons!
He secretly read the passage again.
Discovered....
If you write this text yourself, I am afraid that I will not be able to write it....
............
The jury is still like that.
The live broadcast room is naturally more explosive!
[Good fellow, I didn't expect that the ancestors of the Lin family could still be traced back to the Southern Song Dynasty! ] This description is so feeling! 】
[Is this the strength of the first place in the divisional competition?] Bullpen! Broken sound! 】
[Based on this description alone, No. 48 is enough to seal a god! ] Advance to the next round! 】
[Unexpectedly, during the Republic of China, the ancestors of the Lin family were still local gatekeepers, and they could actually ensure the safety of one party! ] Awesome! 】
[With such a historical background, it is no wonder that the Tazhai clan culture is so rich. 】
[With this background, I can understand more and more that Lin Yaodong is going to lead the rise of Tazhai, which is the rise, this is clearly the revival! ] 】
[Do things that violate the law and discipline, just to repair the ancestral hall.] Before I thought this was too bloody, but now I look at it, it's me shallow! 】
[Brother Dong is too grounded! ] A person who is bent on leading his clan to rise and build an ancestral hall, what bad intentions can he have (the dog's head saves his life). 】
[Suddenly think Lin Yaodong is so cute! ] Desperately earning money is to obtain the qualification to repair the Lin Clan Ancestral Hall! No. 48 Bullpen! Is this plot really figured out on the spot? The cowpen is blowing up! 】
[This plot is indeed awesome! ] It makes people's scalps tingle! 】
[Looking forward to it, the next plot is even more looking forward to it!!!! 】
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How can you appreciate it yourself!?
Chen Sicheng coughed his throat and felt that he needed to say two words!
"Teacher Shuping, I think Lu Chen's description of clan culture is too superficial!
Clan culture is such a thing with a long history, depth, content, and a sense of heaviness!
But you found no.
From beginning to end, Lu Chen only emphasized the concept of clan culture, and always emphasized how deeply the clan culture influenced Lin Yaodong.
But he never mentioned the background of the Lin clan, as well as some family disciplines and so on.
Don't you think, this is too shallow? "
Chen Sicheng's words came out.
All three judges cast their eyes.
The eyes looked at him slightly strangely.
"Teacher Chen, it's good to be demanding, but isn't it unreasonable to be too demanding, just three hours of creative time, if you want to do everything, this is not reasonable in itself, right?
Moreover, Lu Chen only needed to draw the concept of clan out now.
There is time to add content to it later, it is completely timely. "
Shuping retorted.
It's only three hours of creative time, and it's very cramped to create a story.
What else do you expect to be invulnerable?
Shuping just can't tell it in person, give you three hours, what story can you create?
Maybe there may not be Lu Chen's current story, so intimate.
When Chen Sicheng heard this, he was first stunned, then paused, and said with a smile: "It's the same, after all, time is limited, just put forward the concept." "
Seeing that Chen Sicheng did not have hard steel, his attitude was quite good.
Shuping also gave him a step.
"But Mr. Chen, you also have a point. Regarding the clan culture, if there is a chance to write a script in the future, Lu Chen really needs to think about it, add some content to it, and make it as full as possible. "
Chen Sicheng nodded.
When Liu Heping and Yan Gelin heard this, they also bowed their heads slightly, which was regarded as a response to this "argument" between the two.
The gaze is once again on the big screen....
Inside the room.
When Lu Chen wrote this, he stopped writing again.
Standing in front of the whiteboard, I thought quietly for a while.
This plot of the ancestral hall.
Lu Chen felt that it was necessary to focus on it.
After all, Lin Yaodong's ultimate goal is not only to lead the tower.
In the paragraph of dialogue with Zhao Jialiang Tiantai.
Lin Yaodong clearly pointed out that his personal highest ideal is to repair one of the most luxurious, largest and most gorgeous Lin ancestral halls.
It can be said that for this goal, Lin Yaodong has been preparing for at least ten years!
Just on the eve of the implementation of the plan!
Tazhai Poison Village has collapsed!
Presumably, this has also become Lin Yaodong's lifelong regret.
In the TV series, the Lin ancestral hall is not only an important filming location.
In the episode, it also appears many times, and Lin Yaodong quietly looks up at the ancestral hall...
So....
Lu Chen felt that it was necessary for him to focus on this section of the ancestral hall.
Explain this section of the ancestral hall clearly and render it fully.
For the audience, it is also beneficial to understand the Lin clan.
It just so happens that in the original play, there is a very detailed description of the Lin ancestral hall...
Think of this.
Lu Chen secretly took a breath and continued to write
"If you say that leading the rise of Tazhai is Lin Yaodong's spiritual goal!
Then, building the small shrine of the main house and repairing the Lin family ancestral hall is Lin Yaodong's material goal.
Building the small shrine of the main house is not difficult for Lin Yaodong.
As a person in this room, as long as you have money, you can repair it whenever you want!
But repairing the Lin Clan Ancestral Hall is not so easy!
It must be a person of high moral character and a well-to-do family to do it.
These two points, with Lin Yaodong's strength at that time, did not possess.
Therefore, repairing the Great Ancestral Hall has become a lofty goal buried in Lin Yaodong's heart after he gradually developed!
(Here, I feel that I need to arrange a background history for the ancestors of the Lin family to highlight the heritage of the Lin family and the historical and cultural background of Tazhai Village.) ）"
Lu Chen deliberately marked it with parentheses.
First, it is to show the mental journey of your own creation, and the direction of thinking!
Guaranteed more "authenticity" for on-site creations!
Second, Lu Chen also had to lay a reasonable foundation for the background that led to the Lin family tree next.
Lu Chen took a pen and paced back and forth in the room.
Judges' room.
Saw Lu Chen write this paragraph.
Yan Gelin laughed on the spot: "It's really said that Cao Cao arrived, we just discussed that the concept of clan is not clear. Lu Chen planned to add the content to the Lin family. "
Shu Ping also immediately turned his head to look at Chen Sicheng and said with a smile: "Teacher Chen, it seems that you asked a question one step earlier." The problem you thought of was obviously already considered by Lu Chen. "
Chen Sicheng's smile was a little stiff, and he said that it was not, and it was not to say it.
I could only barely laugh twice and prevaricate.
I thought: What a hell, I just asked a question, Lu Chen thought about it?
............
Lu Chen was in the room, pacing back and forth for more than a dozen times.
Sudden stop.
Between the eyebrows, a sudden look was revealed.
Then, he hurried to the whiteboard and wrote down a paragraph.
Have an answer so soon?
The judges and netizens all fixed their eyes and wondered what Lu Chen would write.
I saw a line of text as follows:
"The ancestral genealogy records that in the fourth year of the Southern Song Dynasty, Shi Yinggong moved here from Fujian Anxi, purchased acres of land, built grass houses, and settled here.
Later, when his children developed, they changed the original grass shed into an ancestral hall, which was the first time in history that the Lin ancestral hall was built.
Later, during the Qianlong Jiaqing period, thanks to the development of the sugar industry and the prosperity of Jiazigang, the Lin clan repaired the Lin ancestral hall for the second time.
Then during the Republic of China, the army was in chaos, the soldiers were popular, and the clan forces that ensured local peace were able to grow! The strength of the Lin family once reached its peak. The renovated Lin ancestral hall is also magnificent and magnificent. "
?Wow!
See this description.
Liu Heping, Shuping people, all gurgled in his heart!
Rao is a historical drama giant like Liu Heping!
When I saw this description, I didn't feel that my eyes lit up, and my eyes showed a trace of essence!
Shuping, Yan Gelin couldn't help nodding and praised.
"This description is strong and profound! Pretty well written! "
"Across three periods of history, the tone is fresh and condensed, I didn't expect Lu Chen to have the potential to write historical dramas, Mr. Liu, what do you think?"
Yan Gelin looked at Liu Heping.
The latter smiled slightly and nodded: "This background is good, echoing the two themes of clan culture and ancestral hall culture, there is depth, history, and breadth, and it is worth affirming to have such a performance!" "
See that all three judges gave high praise.
Chen Sicheng's face on the side turned even redder.
But there is only one word in my heart: lean!
I didn't expect that on the 48th, there were really two sons!
He secretly read the passage again.
Discovered....
If you write this text yourself, I am afraid that I will not be able to write it....
............
The jury is still like that.
The live broadcast room is naturally more explosive!
[Good fellow, I didn't expect that the ancestors of the Lin family could still be traced back to the Southern Song Dynasty! ] This description is so feeling! 】
[Is this the strength of the first place in the divisional competition?] Bullpen! Broken sound! 】
[Based on this description alone, No. 48 is enough to seal a god! ] Advance to the next round! 】
[Unexpectedly, during the Republic of China, the ancestors of the Lin family were still local gatekeepers, and they could actually ensure the safety of one party! ] Awesome! 】
[With such a historical background, it is no wonder that the Tazhai clan culture is so rich. 】
[With this background, I can understand more and more that Lin Yaodong is going to lead the rise of Tazhai, which is the rise, this is clearly the revival! ] 】
[Do things that violate the law and discipline, just to repair the ancestral hall.] Before I thought this was too bloody, but now I look at it, it's me shallow! 】
[Brother Dong is too grounded! ] A person who is bent on leading his clan to rise and build an ancestral hall, what bad intentions can he have (the dog's head saves his life). 】
[Suddenly think Lin Yaodong is so cute! ] Desperately earning money is to obtain the qualification to repair the Lin Clan Ancestral Hall! No. 48 Bullpen! Is this plot really figured out on the spot? The cowpen is blowing up! 】
[This plot is indeed awesome! ] It makes people's scalps tingle! 】
[Looking forward to it, the next plot is even more looking forward to it!!!! 】
PS: Does anyone still read this book?
I'm so panicked, the data doesn't move at all....
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